Chapter 6-1 Page 18

August 29th, 2013, 8:14 am

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You'd be surprised what can alter memories

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MannyKat8x, August 29th, 2013, 8:14 am     Reply


I already regret drawing all of those trees

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vinsabl, August 29th, 2013, 11:07 am     Reply


XD

Rehab Bunny, August 29th, 2013, 12:54 pm     Reply


Legit reasoning.

Rai-Chu, August 29th, 2013, 1:54 pm     Reply


helpful =v='

D.P. (Guest), September 3rd, 2013, 7:18 am     Reply

Visible evolution
I'll be quite honest here. It was really difficult to bear with the first pages. The story is interesting, the characters have a cool design, but the art was somewhat... lacking. But I gave it chance and it got me hooked up. Looking back at the first pages, this comic feels way different. Your skill visibly improved since you started this webcomic and this page is particularly good. You've got a fan here. Keep working hard and maybe try to work with the speech ballons, see if you can make them more organic.

Kudos,
D.P.

MannyKat8x, September 3rd, 2013, 10:17 am     Reply


@D.P.: Thanks ^u^

It's part of why I'm in the process of redrawing all of the first act entirely..or at least the first two chapters (since those were really short and still just barely starting the comic skills) to eventually print them in a book and then eventually post them here so the art of the first chapters is a little more appealing c:

How would you suggest I make the bubbles more organic? I'm always open to improving my comicing process :D

M@Cormack, June 15th, 2014, 7:56 am     Reply


'Fire rings a bell', do I sense a terrible pun :D

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